A Hundred Quills
"Words.Words.I play with words, hoping that some combination, even a chance combination will say what I want" -Doris Lessing
जो छूट गए…
जो छूट गए
वो पल भर थे
सागर नही
बस लहर ही थे
मंज़िल तो नही
पथिक ही थे
फिर क्षोभ है क्यों
उनके जाने का
क्रोध है क्यों
संसार मे जिसने
जन्म लिया
पृथक ही उसने
जीवन जिया
आते जाते कुछ
हाथ मिले
जो एक मोड़ तक
साथ चले
फिर राह चुनी जो तूने
उनकी राह नही वो थी
जो तेरी थी इच्छा
उनकी चाह नही वो थी
फिर क्षोभ है क्यों
उनके जाने का
क्रोध है क्यों
जो संग जिया
वो खूब जिया
क्यों मांगे आँचल सारा
सौरमंडल की आस में तू
भूल न जा इकलौता तारा
जो साथ अभी है
रात जभी है
वही रहनुमा
सौगात वही है
अब जीने की
आस वही है
तो क्षोभ न कर
तू क्रोध न कर
वो छोड़ गए, अफसोस न कर
जो है वो साथ निभाएगा
समय पूर्ण होने पर वह भी
अपनी अलग राह बनाएगा
लिखा है जितना साथ है जिसका
उतना ही वो निभाएगा
एकल जो तू चला कभी तो
प्रभु सखा बन आएगा
प्रभु सखा बन आएगा!
©Sonia Dogra
36 Comments on “जो छूट गए…”
Leave a Reply
Recent Comments
 | hemasha on Mountains & the Delhi… |
 | Liz Gauffreau on Mountains & the Delhi… |
 | ShankySalty on बड़े शहरों में मेरा मन नही… |
 | Jyoti Jha on Mountains & the Delhi… |
 | aditi on Mountains & the Delhi… |
one word lajawab
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Shantanu💐💐
LikeLiked by 1 person
My absolute pleasure
LikeLike
Ekdm sahiigr8
LikeLike
You never fail to touch hearts, irrespective of the language you chose.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Moushmi
LikeLiked by 1 person
My first read in the morning…and it turned out to be so motivating, reflecting undulations of life and the courage to accept the things as they are to march ahead in life with acceptance and smile and with frown.
Beautiful one Sonia.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you Anagha for stopping by
LikeLike
Oops… read my comment and realised the blooper of my buttery fingers.
I meant to say with acceptance and smile and not with drawn.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I guessed that. Thanks
LikeLike
Bahut hi behtareen rachna
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you
LikeLike
Bahut khub. Meetings and partings are part of life.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. That is the harsh truth!
LikeLike
Beautifully penned 💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you 💐💐
LikeLike
After long read a poem bordering on ‘ veer ras’. Felt what your experience says.looking forward to more ♥️💖
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
Bahut sundar..jiska jitna saath likha hai wo utna hee nibhayga..is baat ko man mein agar utaar le toh na kshobh rahega, na krodh..
aapki kavita pad kar harivansh rai bacchan ki kavita yaad aa gayi..jo beet gayo so baat gayi…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes Arti. The essence of both is nearly the same. Thank you!💐💐
LikeLike
Prabhu sakha: beautiful and powerful; liberating and wise:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Glad Arti! Thank you for stopping by…
LikeLike
Sonia bahut sundar …beeti tahi bisaar de aage ki sudhi le …yadein reh jaati hain yaad aati hai …
LikeLiked by 1 person
Absolutely! Thank you for reading💐💐
LikeLike
Sonia you’ve so effectively delineated the sense of loneliness, the raging sentiments, some deprivation, and unfulfilled desires in a subtle manner. All these are unavoidable parts of our lives in one way or the other. The cherry on the top is your message of optimism.
Loved your creation…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ma’am you’ve summarized the essence perfectly. Thank you!💐💐
LikeLike
Very soothing Sonia. Loved every word of it. I belong to a family where Hindi is treasured. Many family members write hindi poetry and prose too. And needless to say, those writings are beautiful. Today, I felt the same connection in your words. Lo main apni kahani leke baith gayi… beautiful post
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Vartika. I love to read and write in hindi though I have a long way to go!
LikeLike
Quite philosophical. 👍
LikeLiked by 1 person
Glad you enjoyed!
LikeLike
अत्यंत शोभनीय शब्दों द्वारा आपने जीवन के कटु सत्य को मार्मिक रूप से दर्शाया है। बहुत सुंदर ।
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Jyoti. I’m glad you could relate to it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
सोनिया जी आपने कमाल की कविता लिखी है, अती सुन्दर
LikeLiked by 1 person
धन्यवाद आपका सरहाने के लिए
LikeLiked by 1 person
बहुत सुन्दर भाव, एक कटु सत्य भी, साथ जब तक है तब तक उसे जिया जाए|
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Anjali.
LikeLike